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Smart Respiratory Device with IoT Connectivity
Abstract
Assisted ventilation, often known as electrical ventilation in medicine, refers to artificial ventilation in which a motorized electrical system is utilized to supplement or replace natural breathing. A ventilator may be used for this, or an electrical motor may be used to physically help in breathing by squeezing a bag valve mask device. It makes sense that engineering and architecture must adhere to current regulations in order for any project to be realized. But we also need to consider whether the legal requirements' limitations are adequate. From this point, this is where intelligent ventilation comes into play. It makes no sense, from a logical and economic point of view, to practice the same levels of ventilation, for example, in a gym at night when it is completely empty than during the day when users use their services.
Sivaprasad Nadukuru Reviewer
03 Oct 2024 11:28 AM
Approved
Relevance and Originality
The text addresses a pertinent topic in modern medicine and engineering—assisted ventilation and intelligent ventilation systems. The connection between artificial ventilation and energy efficiency is original and timely, particularly as buildings increasingly adopt smart technologies. By questioning the adequacy of current legal requirements, the text opens a necessary discussion about optimizing ventilation practices based on usage patterns, which could lead to significant advancements in both healthcare and facility management.
Methodology
While the text presents a broad overview of assisted ventilation, it lacks a detailed methodology for evaluating current practices or assessing intelligent ventilation systems. Incorporating specific case studies or examples of how intelligent ventilation has been implemented successfully could provide a more solid foundation. Clear definitions and explanations of the technological processes involved would also enhance understanding, making the discussion more impactful.
Validity & Reliability
The arguments presented about the economic logic behind intelligent ventilation are valid, yet they would benefit from supporting data or references to existing research. Citing studies that demonstrate the effectiveness and efficiency of such systems in various environments would strengthen the claims. Addressing potential counterarguments or limitations of intelligent ventilation could also improve the reliability of the assertions made.
Clarity and Structure
The text is generally coherent but could be better structured for clarity. Breaking it into distinct sections with headings—such as "Introduction to Assisted Ventilation," "Legal Considerations," and "Benefits of Intelligent Ventilation"—would help guide the reader. Additionally, simplifying some technical terms or providing brief explanations would make the content more accessible to a broader audience.
Result Analysis
While the text implies a critical analysis of ventilation practices, it does not provide explicit results or findings. Expanding on the potential outcomes of implementing intelligent ventilation—such as cost savings, improved air quality, or enhanced user experience—would enrich the discussion. Including quantitative data or comparisons to traditional methods could also provide a clearer picture of the benefits and efficiency of intelligent ventilation systems.
IJ Publication Publisher
Ok sir
Sivaprasad Nadukuru Reviewer