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Smart Respiratory Device with IoT Connectivity
Abstract
Assisted ventilation, often known as electrical ventilation in medicine, refers to artificial ventilation in which a motorized electrical system is utilized to supplement or replace natural breathing. A ventilator may be used for this, or an electrical motor may be used to physically help in breathing by squeezing a bag valve mask device. It makes sense that engineering and architecture must adhere to current regulations in order for any project to be realized. But we also need to consider whether the legal requirements' limitations are adequate. From this point, this is where intelligent ventilation comes into play. It makes no sense, from a logical and economic point of view, to practice the same levels of ventilation, for example, in a gym at night when it is completely empty than during the day when users use their services.
Archit Joshi Reviewer
02 Oct 2024 05:49 PM
Approved
Relevance and Originality
The research article addresses a significant issue in the medical field—assisted ventilation—making it highly relevant, especially with advancements in technology. The introduction of intelligent ventilation presents an original approach to optimize ventilation levels based on occupancy, which is an innovative perspective not commonly discussed in existing literature. This focus on improving ventilation efficiency in varied environments, such as gyms, underscores the article's relevance to both healthcare and architectural design.
Methodology
While the article discusses the concepts of assisted and intelligent ventilation, it lacks a detailed methodology outlining how these concepts were examined. A clearer framework detailing the criteria for evaluating ventilation practices would strengthen the study. Additionally, incorporating data or case studies to illustrate how intelligent ventilation can be implemented in real-world settings would enhance the robustness of the methodology.
Validity & Reliability
To enhance the validity of the claims made regarding intelligent ventilation, the article should include empirical evidence or examples of successful implementations in similar environments. Addressing potential biases in the assumptions about user behavior and ventilation needs would improve the reliability of the findings. Moreover, including a discussion on the challenges of adopting intelligent ventilation systems would provide a more balanced view.
Clarity and Structure
The article generally maintains a logical structure, guiding readers from the introduction of assisted ventilation to the concept of intelligent ventilation. However, clearer definitions of key terms, such as "intelligent ventilation," would aid reader comprehension, particularly for those unfamiliar with the topic. Incorporating visual aids or diagrams to illustrate the differences between traditional and intelligent ventilation systems could further enhance clarity.
Result Analysis
While the article highlights the need for variable ventilation levels based on occupancy, it should delve deeper into the implications of these findings for practical applications. Discussing the benefits of intelligent ventilation, such as energy savings and improved air quality, would provide a more thorough analysis. Additionally, including recommendations for future research or pilot studies on intelligent ventilation systems would encourage further exploration in this important area.
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Archit Joshi Reviewer