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SMART SAFETY WEARABLE: LEVERAGING IOT AND GPS FOR WOMEN'S SECURITY
Abstract
This study has In today's society, women often bear a disproportionate share of responsibilities within their families. Factors such as domestic violence, sexual assault, and kidnapping have forced many women to seek refuge within the safety of their homes. However, even in the modern era, women continue to face the distressing reality of sexual harassment and assault. Recent surveys have shown that a staggering 84 percent of women have experienced harassment in various settings. The prevalence of crimes against women is alarming, necessitating the development of a comprehensive protection framework to ensure their safety and well-being. Amidst these challenges, technology offers hope for improving the living standards and safety of women. One potential avenue is the use of technology in women's safety devices. These devices come equipped with various sensors and features to address the growing security needs of our society. The primary objective of these devices is to maximize the security and protection of women without relying on technology. They are engineered to provide enhanced safety measures, encompassing a wide spectrum of potential threats women may encounter in their daily lives. These devices aim to harness technology to bolster the safety and security of women, contributing to a safer and more equitable world for them.
Darshan Patel Reviewer
03 Jun 2024 11:53 AM
Approved
my comments on the abstract: Clarity and Focus: The abstract provides a broad overview of the issues women face regarding safety and how technology can help. However, the central focus of the research should be more clearly articulated. It is important to explicitly state the main research question or objective. Relevance of Information: The inclusion of statistics about the prevalence of harassment is pertinent and strengthens the argument. Ensure that all included statistics are relevant and directly support the primary objective of the study. Conciseness: Abstracts should be concise and to the point. Some sentences can be streamlined to enhance readability and brevity. Specificity: While the abstract mentions "safety devices equipped with various sensors and features," it would be beneficial to specify what types of sensors and features are being referred to, if space allows. This will give readers a clearer understanding of the technological aspect. Coherence and Consistency: Ensure that there is no contradiction in the role of technology in safety devices. The statement "without relying on technology" should be rephrased or removed to avoid confusion, as the primary focus is on technology-enhanced safety. Impact and Contribution: Highlight the significance and potential impact of the research. What contribution does this study make to the existing body of knowledge or practical applications in the field of women's safety? Technical Terms: Avoid overly technical jargon in the abstract to ensure it is accessible to a broader audience, but include necessary terms to convey the research's technical depth. Grammar and Syntax: Minor grammatical corrections are needed to improve readability.
IJ Publication Publisher
Paper Accepted by Reviewers and Editor-in-Chief.
Thank you for your prompt reply.
Darshan Patel Reviewer