Hemasundara Reddy Lanka Reviewer
04 Apr 2025 09:11 PM

Terminology:
- The term “data warehouse modernization” appears in the literature review but is not clearly defined or explained in the body.
Figures & Tables
- Tables are rich in information but would benefit from visual representations (e.g., bar charts, radar plots) to highlight differences in performance, cost, and governance.
Citations:
- Some sources (e.g., “Kimball (2015)”) need full citations or DOIs for verification. Ensure proper referencing.
Formatting & Grammar:
- A few grammatical inconsistencies exist (e.g., minor punctuation issues in the introduction). Consider proofreading for flow and style refinement.
Recommendations Section:
- Consider expanding the recommendations section to be more actionable (e.g., “Organizations should...”), particularly for enterprises transitioning to hybrid/multi-cloud data ecosystems.
Hemasundara Reddy Lanka Reviewer
04 Apr 2025 08:58 PM